Poetry Maybe #46: Sunset Challenges

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Sunset Challenges
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with reeling 
from a feeling 
that she has 
lost a step,
What's this we see?

In the open, Sunset
cancels out gorgeous real estate
and palm trees.

Rockets lasting longer
than shows about cake.
Sunset challenges the 
cutthroat market
of gorgeous ladies
with their
mansions, 
romance,
and deception

Poetry Maybe

holley4734

“Just a small town girl – living in a lonely world.” Concert tickets are practically essential. Musicals are the key to life. I like movies, music,books, and corny jokes.

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  2. ben Alexander – David Bogomolny was born in Jerusalem to parents who made Aliyah from the USSR in the mid-70's. He grew up in America, and returned to Israel as an adult. He works as a grant writer for the Jewish Agency for Israel. He and his wife and daughter live in Jerusalem.
    ben Alexander says:

    Holley, thanks so much for sharing this poem with me for ‘Poetry Partners’. I’ve responded to it and published it here at The Skeptic’s Kaddish:

    https://skepticskaddish.com/2023/05/29/rockets-or-shows-about-cake/

    Much love,
    David

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    1. holley4734 – “Just a small town girl – living in a lonely world.” Concert tickets are practically essential. Musicals are the key to life. I like movies, music,books, and corny jokes.
      holley4734 says:

      Awesome! I can’t wait to see it. Thank you so much! 🙂

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      1. ben Alexander – David Bogomolny was born in Jerusalem to parents who made Aliyah from the USSR in the mid-70's. He grew up in America, and returned to Israel as an adult. He works as a grant writer for the Jewish Agency for Israel. He and his wife and daughter live in Jerusalem.
        ben Alexander says:

        🤗

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